Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Updates on "Trapped"

Okay, so I gave a copy of Trapped in a Room to my Literature professor and just got it back today, to my pleasant surprise she really liked it. She had quite a few suggestions that I never considered. One that really stood out was giving it a more ambiguous title, which I first I was kind of against but then as I read her comment further she said, ""make the reader work for it." and that really perked a response in me.
I had also given a copy to one of my coworkers from BLD and he had some good suggestions too, about different things, some of which I never even considered.
But the most important thing and the main reason I'm writing this post is because my Literature professor suggested that I submit it to a competition that's coming up. The deadline is December first which gives me a whole month to revise it. That's good because I'd want to show my professor my revisions and she how she felt about them.
So I might actually accomplish my New Year's Resolution after all. Which would be BEAST as fuck, dig?
Expect to see updates and revisions of it on here in the next few days, but it won't be too drastic of a change, so if you're expecting that you will be let down.
Alright people, let's do this!
-Sir Jestro

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